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How do you go about feeling out the voice of a new piece of fiction? In fact, how do you think about/define/talk about voice in general?

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thank you very much for your question, sara. let me see if i can answer this one more formally....

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After recommending Oscar Wao my sister has recently and quickly finished your works. She’s thirsting for more novels that tap into Dominican culture in a way that speaks to our experience. Looking forward to checking out the two works in this post, but I’ve got to ask: any other novels come to mind that might scratch that never-ending itch?

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I always recommend Julia Alvarez, Cleyvis Natera, Angie Cruz, Nelly Rosario, Elizabeth Acevedo, Dan-el Padilla Peralta's memoir and for the cross-border perspective Edwidge Danticat...

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More cross-border perspective & MUST READ : Évelyne Trouillot's The Infamous Rosalie. Prolific author, but so far, only 3 works in translation. (And yes, another brilliant member of familia Trouillot.)

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I’ve read Alvarez and Danticat, excited to check out the others. Thank you for the response

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I had a question for office hours. Solmaz Sharif once asked in an interview, "Why are writers afraid of the pedantic moment?" I have been thinking of that recently, especially as so many writers in the US run to the hills when it comes to issues like Palestine. My question is: do you know of any novels that are pedantic that are good? Of course this is all relative, as each person defines being pedantic in different ways, but I am curious how you think through these issues. Also, big fan of yours. Thanks! Zahir

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zahir, thank you for your kind question. i agree A-- that pedantic means different things for different people and B --Palestine brings out negatives in a lot of folks, not just writers.

since im not exactly sure what you mean by pedantic im going to assume the standard dictionary definition -- excessively learned. i will add my own flourish: encyclopedic. plenty of writers draw upon the encyclopedic tradition that runs through literary history with folks like Melville and Hugo as prime practioners.

as for pedantic books that are good -- i mean, damn, books that are heavy on worldbuilding tend to be endlessly pedantic and some of these are also super awesome. Vinge's A Fire in the Deep. Neal Stephenson's novels, starting with Snow Crash. Mieville's Perdido Street Station. The Three-Body Problem. Rushdie's encyclopedic fusillades in Midnight's Children and Shame might also qualify.

But if you really want hardcore pedantic try William Vollmann's books. i for one love reading pedantic books but i dont write them. it happens.

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Thanks Junot. I appreciate this generous response. Loving the substack. Keep it up!

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I’ll have to read some of those other books, but I have to say Mantel’s A Place of Greater Safety is one of the most powerful novels I’ve read—exceeded only by her great trilogy about Thomas Cromwell.

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When should a writer use a pronoun instead of a character’s name?

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When the sentence rhythm and the blocking and memory of your imagined ideal reader demands it.

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How do you create an exposition that draws the reader into the story? I feel like I have an idea of how I want my story to begin, but when I go to write it, I’m not sure if I should start with inner dialogue, or an action the character is doing or what’s going on around the character or etc…).

I find this particularly difficult when writing in the third person POV limited. I hope I make sense ^^;;;.

Thank you so much!

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