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Nicole's avatar

I'm with Mia, I'm hooked, and I'm with Ada too as, yes, the experience must be what reading Dickens in serial form felt like.

And most of all, thank you Feckles!

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Junot Díaz's avatar

thank you nicole! im trying to get through Part I before I have to go back to classes in september but we'll see .

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Nicole's avatar

fingers crossed into the tightest of braids as I want to read more, more, more please. xx

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Stephanie Thomas Montero's avatar

Good job Feckles! Thanks for saving our boy.

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Mia Wolff's avatar

I’m hooked!

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Junot Díaz's avatar

thank you, mia. i suspect its just you and a handful but a few hooked readers is all a tale needs to live.

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Jeffrey J. Cravens's avatar

I’m with Mia! Really digging the world and the mek/flesh concept and looking forward to each new installment.

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Ada Austen's avatar

Life oils and all wearing their WE INSIST WE RESIST! t-shirts. Loving your details.

This is the first serial fiction on Substack I’m reading and this process is so fun as a reader. As conditions deteriorate IRL, I feel akin to the original Dicken’s readers, feeling a precious bit of joy and excitement when the Substack newsboy yells out The Epic Gilgamek! New Episode!

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Junot Díaz's avatar

thank you, ada. grateful to you. this has been a very odd process. as with most things, making this feel flow-ful and effortless taking a lot more work than expected...

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Ada Austen's avatar

I’m very interested in the process as a writer, as I’m sure others are. I’d love to try it, but what a challenge. How big of a buffer would be big enough to not freeze myself with anxiety? I’m not good with deadlines, yet they do light a fire. Anyway, I’m watching with interest and sending you good writing wishes.

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Junot Díaz's avatar

right now my buffer is insanely small - five pages? problem is instead of blazing ahead im always polishing what ive written, i suspect with these projects one needs to burn like a fire but instead im doing the glacial thing.

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José Sotolongo's avatar

Okay, I’m hooked, despite my resistance to anything not grounded in our world as we know it. But I may have to learn that the human experience transcends the material details and go along on the ride. And the name “Feckles “ is so brilliant. It makes me want to protect her because, in my mind’s eye, she must have freckles.

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Junot Díaz's avatar

the few folks who comment all like feckles! thank you josé for tolerating the estrangement

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Andrea Rehani-Estes's avatar

I am so excited to read these too!! I love the line about Feckles. “—and yet here she is.” Those em dashes are the breath of the mind—drawing on poetry! Stoked to read more. Grateful to be able to read these—thank you!

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